Monday, March 31, 2025

The Horse That Had a Flat Tire by Richard Brautigan

 Once upon a valley

that came down

from some goldenblue mountains 

a handsome young prince 

who was riding

a dawncolored horse

named Lordsburg.


I love you

You're my breathing castle

Gentle so gentle

We'll live forever


In the valley

there was a beautiful maiden

whom the prince

drifted into love with

like a New Mexico made from

apple thunder and long

glass beds.


I love you

You're my breathing castle

Gentle so gentle

We'll live forever


The prince enchanted

the maiden

and they rode off

on the dawncolored horse

named Lordsburg

toward the goldenblue mountains.


I love you

You're my breathing castle

Gentle so gentle

We'll live forever


They would've lived

happily ever after 

if the horse hadn't had

a flat tire

in front of a dragon's

house.



I've only just stumbled across it, but this poem has quickly become one of my favorites of all time. I'm constantly thinking about it.

I think extra carefully about the final stanza. Such an abrupt, seemingly impossible ending to a beautifully depicted love story. If only they'd had a spare tire! This raises a question: would there have been another dragon somewhere along the way?

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